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  • Other Poetry Re: go on without me/tell me how it is

    I thought this was well written and very good. It really seemed to get inside the head of the girl in the poem. Whether intentional or not, I think your ...

    Feb 23, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: go on without me/tell me how it is

    it begins with a pool of vomit from a girl's mouth mucus and saliva on her chin drip drip onto a night dress soaked orange red sweat on her face, ...

    Feb 22, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: it's friday night and i feel like dancing

    Please rate this "R" that's all I have to say for now, maybe I'll come back later :roll: Cheerios, Chandni hehe you're not very nice :D

    Feb 21, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: it's friday night and i feel like dancing

    bass beats pounding in my head i shake a meathead's hand "have a good night alrite" he looks into my eyes he says everything's gonna be all right! tell me ...

    Feb 20, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: The Underside of his Napkin

    you're easily my favorite writer on this site and this is why.

    Feb 20, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: The Cadaver

    pretty great. my favorite part is: "they had cut out his eyes: they knew not how much those things leaked."

    Feb 14, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: eulogies

    get this out of my head get this out of my head you don't need sleep motherfucker i hope this means nothing to you this isn't for you 1 valerie ...

    Feb 5, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: 1/3

    I don’t talk much these days. Driving on a nondescript road and miles of cornfields blending into each other. I spot a gas station and stop to fill up. I ...

    Jan 20, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Motivation

    you have some nice ideas here but i couldn't help feeling isolated from the narrator. he gets bullied for a year then decides to commit suicide. the question is, so ...

    Jan 16, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Sufjan Stevens?

    I can't say I'm a huge fan but "Casimir Pulaski Day" is probably one of my favorite songs ever and you can definitely respect his appreciation for epic arrangements.

    Jan 12, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: what

    It’s 9:00 not much to do how about you get the vodka from your fridge and we’ll have ourselves a time. Greg gets back 9:15 with the booze wrapped in ...

    Jan 11, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Children of Men

    I was listening to an interview with Cuaron on NPR and apparently they spent twelve days prepping for that seven-minute (not nine, as I originally thought) Steadicam shot. Reportedly "choreographed ...

    Jan 8, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Children of Men

    Really? I found it pretty moving. Though my friend did look at his watch and say "That's it?"

    Jan 7, 2007
  • Lounge, The Re: Children of Men

    Here's what you should do: Go online. Look up the showtimes for Children of Men. Pick one. Call up a group of friends. Watch the movie. This is a bleak, ...

    Jan 7, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: i believed in god when she was alive

    I’m living in a state of waking slumber. I keep taking naps. Hour, hour and a half naps. In the morning after I’ve eaten breakfast, in the afternoon after I’ve ...

    Jan 5, 2007


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